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Jada
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Age : 14
Joined : 19 Apr 2007
Posts : 357
Where do you live? : Winnipeg, MB
 |  Subject: Songs  Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:11 pm | |
| Have you ever thought of writing a song?
Well this topic is for people that have song ideas that they want someone to put together for them or for people who just want advice or comments on songs they have already written.
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I'M SO MAD! NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ME ANYMORE!
I THINK IT'S EMO TIME!
LOVE SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEXYJADA!
THANX FOR BELIEVING IN ME ZAC! (SEXYZAC!)
LOL!
THAT'S RIGHT! I SAID SEXY!
CONNER YOU'RE SUCH A JERK! LEAVE ME ALONE!
SO OVER YOU... ♥J |
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Jada
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Age : 14
Joined : 19 Apr 2007
Posts : 357
Where do you live? : Winnipeg, MB
| | Subject: Re: Songs Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:18 pm | |
| Here's my example...
Hope For You
Verse 1:
Softly flutter the wings of an angel
Slowly soaring through starry night skies
Singing a sweet melody
Of love and of life
Of wishes and dreams
Of pain and of strife
Oh how I long for your warm embrace
For the faith and the peace that you offer
Why you left I still know not
So now all I have is hope
Chorus:
Hope that you will come
Hope that you will stay
Hope that we will be together one day
Hope for you…
Just hope for you
Verse 2:
Screams of misery burst from my soul
Tearing, ripping my breaking heart
Crying out in agony
Of love and of life
Of wishes and dreams
Of pain and of strife
Oh how I weep for love that is lost
It stings and aches wounding my spirit
Why you left I still know not
So now all I have is hope
Chorus:
Hope that you will come
Hope that you will stay
Hope that we will be together one day
Hope for you…
Just hope for you
Verse 3:
Joy and happiness fill me completely
Tears from heaven flow down my cheeks
Sobbing so contentedly
Of love and of life
Of wishes and dreams
Of pain and of strife
Oh how can I feel this much trust
My Adoration is far past rare
Why you left I still know not
So now all I have is hope
Chorus:
Hope that you will come
Hope that you will stay
Hope that we will be together one day
Hope for you…
Just hope for you
Oh I hope for you
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I'M SO MAD! NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ME ANYMORE!
I THINK IT'S EMO TIME!
LOVE SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEXYJADA!
THANX FOR BELIEVING IN ME ZAC! (SEXYZAC!)
LOL!
THAT'S RIGHT! I SAID SEXY!
CONNER YOU'RE SUCH A JERK! LEAVE ME ALONE!
SO OVER YOU... ♥J |
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Lola
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Age : 16
Joined : 27 Mar 2008
Posts : 15
| | Subject: Re: Songs Sun Mar 30, 2008 2:21 pm | |
| wow Jada that's amazing!!!
you're so good at writing songs!!!
ily
Lola |
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Jada
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Age : 14
Joined : 19 Apr 2007
Posts : 357
Where do you live? : Winnipeg, MB
| | Subject: Re: Songs Sun Mar 30, 2008 2:35 pm | |
| It's not that good it's one of the first songs I wrote...
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I'M SO MAD! NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ME ANYMORE!
I THINK IT'S EMO TIME!
LOVE SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEXYJADA!
THANX FOR BELIEVING IN ME ZAC! (SEXYZAC!)
LOL!
THAT'S RIGHT! I SAID SEXY!
CONNER YOU'RE SUCH A JERK! LEAVE ME ALONE!
SO OVER YOU... ♥J |
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Lola
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Age : 16
Joined : 27 Mar 2008
Posts : 15
| | Subject: Re: Songs Sun Mar 30, 2008 2:38 pm | |
| | shut up i told you it was amazing and it is! :$ |
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Jada
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Age : 14
Joined : 19 Apr 2007
Posts : 357
Where do you live? : Winnipeg, MB
| | Subject: Re: Songs Sun Mar 30, 2008 2:42 pm | |
| lol okok
_________________
I'M SO MAD! NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ME ANYMORE!
I THINK IT'S EMO TIME!
LOVE SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEXYJADA!
THANX FOR BELIEVING IN ME ZAC! (SEXYZAC!)
LOL!
THAT'S RIGHT! I SAID SEXY!
CONNER YOU'RE SUCH A JERK! LEAVE ME ALONE!
SO OVER YOU... ♥J |
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ashlea<3
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Age : 13
Joined : 28 Mar 2007
Posts : 828
Where do you live? : Cyberspace
| | Subject: Re: Songs Mon Mar 31, 2008 7:18 pm | |
| | JADA wrote: | Here's my example...
Hope For You
Verse 1:
Softly flutter the wings of an angel
Slowly soaring through starry night skies
Singing a sweet melody
Of love and of life
Of wishes and dreams
Of pain and of strife
Oh how I long for your warm embrace
For the faith and the peace that you offer
Why you left I still know not
So now all I have is hope
Chorus:
Hope that you will come
Hope that you will stay
Hope that we will be together one day
Hope for you…
Just hope for you
Verse 2:
Screams of misery burst from my soul
Tearing, ripping my breaking heart
Crying out in agony
Of love and of life
Of wishes and dreams
Of pain and of strife
Oh how I weep for love that is lost
It stings and aches wounding my spirit
Why you left I still know not
So now all I have is hope
Chorus:
Hope that you will come
Hope that you will stay
Hope that we will be together one day
Hope for you…
Just hope for you
Verse 3:
Joy and happiness fill me completely
Tears from heaven flow down my cheeks
Sobbing so contentedly
Of love and of life
Of wishes and dreams
Of pain and of strife
Oh how can I feel this much trust
My Adoration is far past rare
Why you left I still know not
So now all I have is hope
Chorus:
Hope that you will come
Hope that you will stay
Hope that we will be together one day
Hope for you…
Just hope for you
Oh I hope for you |
Jada I LOVE IT!!
and I agree with Lola.
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Tori
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Age : 16
Joined : 30 Mar 2008
Posts : 3
| | Subject: Re: Songs Mon Mar 31, 2008 9:39 pm | |
| | Yeah so do I! |
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Jada
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Age : 14
Joined : 19 Apr 2007
Posts : 357
Where do you live? : Winnipeg, MB
| | Subject: Re: Songs Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:11 pm | |
| ok guys i give in. if you say it's good it's good.
doesn't anyone else write songs?
COME ON PEOPLE!!?!!?!!
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I'M SO MAD! NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ME ANYMORE!
I THINK IT'S EMO TIME!
LOVE SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SEXYJADA!
THANX FOR BELIEVING IN ME ZAC! (SEXYZAC!)
LOL!
THAT'S RIGHT! I SAID SEXY!
CONNER YOU'RE SUCH A JERK! LEAVE ME ALONE!
SO OVER YOU... ♥J |
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